User blog:KrspaceT/Might start a story, need comment and structure first

The story will go with a large world universe, in which a OC hero from my fanfiction universe must travel from world to world, in order to stop the actions of a being named ECLIPSE, a mysterious female with a vizor covering her eyes and auburn hair, who can steal the powers of other beings (Not a vampire). X OVER HEAVY

Character listings (Examples)

Garrow Eragonson ( Son of Eragon and Arya)

John Victoria (Son of Seras Victoria and a OC human)

Claw Ride (Son of Max and Fang)

Zoe Jackson (Daughter of Percy Jackson and Annabeth Chase)

Rookie (Son of Private)

Volcious Black Syltherin Serpens Lestrange (Son of Voldemort and Bellatrix)

Leia Grace (Daughter of Thalia Grace and Luke Casalatan)

Haku (Daughter of Roxas and Namine)

Chroma (Daughter of Kronos)